A TRIP INTO MY MIND

Month: February 2019

I JUST WANNA BE AVERAGE 2

I JUST WANNA BE AVERAGE

  1. “Some people who manage to write their way out of the working class, describe the classroom as an oasis of possibility. It became their intellectual playground, their competitive arena. Given the richness of my memories of this time, its funny how scant are my recollections of school”
  2. “Budding manhood. Only adults talk about adolescence budding. Kids have no choice but to talk in extremes; they are being wrenched and buffeted, rabbit-punched from the inside by systematic thugs. Nothing sweet and pastoral here. Kids become ridiculous and touching at one at the same time; passionate about the trivial, fixed before the mirror, yet traversing one of the most important rights of passage in their lives~liminal people, silly, profoundly human.”

 

QUESTION

  1. People usually defend themselves from the things they feel threatened by because if we are thinking in broad terms, it is human instinct to protect oneself from something that may hurt you or when you feel threatened. In the case of Mike he has a rough upbringing anyway so somethings he already has labeled as a threat because of past experiences.

I just wanna be average

I JUST WANNA BE AVERAGE

 

  1. “The neighborhood was poor, and it was in transition. Some old white folks had lived there for decades and were retired. Younger black families were moving up from Watts and settling by working white class families newly arrived from the South and Midwest.”
  2. “Right to the north of us was a record shop, a barber shop presided over by old Mr. Graff, Walts Malts, a old shoe repair shop with a big Cat’s Paw decal on the window, a third barber shop, and a brake shop” (all this reminds me of my area everything is so close knit)
  3. “One night I watched as a guy sprinted from Walt’s to toss something on our lawn. The police were right behind, and a cop tackled him, smashing his face into the sidewalk; I ducked out to find the packet; a dozen glassine bags of heroin. Another night, one August midnight an argument outside the record store ended with a guy being shot to death”

 

QUESTIONS:

  1. Mike Rose had an experience, not just a normal moving transition experience, like trying to make new friends, going to a different school, or learning the ins and outs of the neighborhood. Mike Rose was put into a place with high crime rates, shootings, police brutality, etc. Some of these things people should never see in their lives, but as a 7-8 year old Mike witnessed these things. “One night I watched as a guy sprinted from Walt’s to toss something on our lawn. The police were right behind, and a cop tackled him, smashing his face into the sidewalk; I ducked out to find the packet; a dozen glassine bags of heroin. Another night, one August midnight an argument outside the record store ended with a guy being shot to death”. These two scenarios depict the life that he had to accustom himself to. Rose’s parents are similar to Coate’s parents in a couple of ways, in a broad view both of these parents had to go through struggles and changes in their lives. Both had to try and make their child’s lives easier than harder, and both of these parents had issues with health, demographic problems, and problems with everyday people.

Questions

  1. When Coates says “The Dream… wars with the real world” I personally think that he means that this dream seems so unreal when you come to a realization of what the world really is then it all disappears, and he says war because everytime this realization comes to his mind the real world always wins, it’s just reality. “Dream rests on our backs, the bedding made for our bodies”.
  2. The American dream is built on black bodies is a very strong but reasonable statement. Simply because in my mind that all of the suffering the african american race has went through over hundreds of years slowly pushed this white supremacy higher and higher above on this platform of “whos better”
  3. Race is the child of racism not the father. I felt this quote on a different level, because I understood it immediately. Imagine if this world did not even place labels on people because of the tone of their skin, imagine if people were just considered people and a person was just considered a person. This “race” label slowly progressed into the problem of racism.

Revisions Essay

Julian Connerton

During the constructive revision process, I was told to attach comments on one of my classmates essays. Looking for pivotal words, sentence fragments, places were quotes should be inserted and the wording of the essay within itself. I made roughly about seven or eight comments on my peers paper. I was never told to do this type of work in high school formally. I usually would just be asked by a friend to just re-read their essay and try and correct the grammatical errors and spelling. I wasn’t asked to formally try and place new quotes into their essay. Until college is when I was asked to formally attempt to put myself in the other person’s shoes and try to read their essay from their prospective. I started off with simple comment because I wasn’t used to doing this. Then Dr. Drown walked by me while I was typing my comments and corrected me. Now my comments are lengthy and full of ideas and words.

When I am editing papers and reviewing them, I am looking for spaces in between their writing where a quote from the passages that were studied could be added. Also, I would be looking for a spot where transitional words could be placed along with words that can change the mood and idea switch of a topic. Pointing out the implications of the writers ideas is big as well, because there are levels of an essay especially talking about a topic such as covering. If the essay is overall pretty good, there is always room for improvement, whether it is the switch between words or paragraph organization. When leaving a comment you should have a reaction to their paragraph by explaining how their paragraph made you feel as well as what you took and understood from reading their essay.

 

Essay Reflection

This has been a couple hardest months in a very long time, so school and trouble does not mix well. I have been trying to get focused and complete all of my assigned work but I only end up doing some of it. I did all of the workload last semester, it is just the simple fact that right now in my life I am personally not in a steady strong mindset. For the work I did do I feel like it was mediocre for the quality of work I did last semester. I had a strong feeling towards the covering aspect essay and how these everyday people who are just different by a label, color, clothes, just the simple way they identify themselves can cause the society around them to bash them, physically, mentally and emotionally abuse these normal people. I feel like I felt so strongly about this topic because I dealt with discrimination towards my identity before, not to the extent of the way these people get treated but I felt their problems first handedly. I feel as if my ideas and the way I personally felt about both of these essays were laid out on my paper very well and I helped build a strong underlying support towards the topic at hand.

There were a bunch of techniques that we were taught either this semester or last semester and I used a couple of these techniques but I definitely believe I could have put more of the techniques that I was taught into my essay, which would make my essay a whole lot better and probably elevate my writing skills. Another thing that I could have done as a writer would have been just to simply try to manage my time better, which is hard given the circumstances I am being put in right now, but that’s no excuse. I will continue to try and do my work fully and on time.

 

New Updated Identity Essay

In today’s society, there are an unlimited amount of problems that go on, on a daily basis. Some may be little nuisances of problems, some may lead to death, some may have been lingering for years on end without any major solution. Many of these issues can be easily seen by the average person, and some go on behind the curtains and have not made rise yet. All these problems are issues that if you are “the problem”, you may be forced to hide your true self or you must put a fake persona on in different places because you are looked down on because of your skin, race, look and identity. These societal discriminations may make everyday life hard for the people who identify themselves in a way that is frowned upon to society.  

An average Muslim American man walks into an airport to catch a flight to see his family in New Jersey, proud to be calling himself Muslim and a man who stands firm in what he believes in will be looked at up and down constantly and be made uncomfortable. Why? Because society has put a label, a negative identity on a religion, a belief. These scenarios happen daily not just to people who believe in being Muslim but, it happens to African Americans, Gays, Women, people with disabilities, etc. Me personally, I’m from a city by the name of Egg Harbor City, New Jersey, Camden, New Jersey, and Philidelphia. All places with high gang activity, drug distribution, violence, a place where people would call it “ghetto” or “the hood”. I use slang on an everyday basis, and I have no problem using it in public because that is just the way I speak, and I am a product of my environment in my own ways. Of course, I walk into a job interview and I will have my tattoos hidden and I will put on a fake persona in the way I talk and carry myself because the way I speak is wrong and incorrect to societies eyes.  

The simple fact that I would have to do that doesn’t bother me as much because of the simple fact that the way I speak is not correct English. On the other hand, something that doesn’t sit well with me is I would have to switch up the way I carry myself. Which may be a good thing or a bad thing. If I were to meet someone in my work environment and I have my fake professional persona on and I run into that person the next day in a location rather than my work place than it would one, be weird two, be very unexpected and it would make me look bad. But in work I look good and I look professional. Over a long period of time hiding my true self from coaches, teachers, parents and job managers, it gets old. I just don’t feel like me when I’m in the certain environments where these people are. It’s really an uncomfortable situation.  

I feel like there are two different groups of people that face societal demands and must hide their true selves, compared to letting themselves be free and expose their true selves to the societal world. One group is the African American culture and the other is Women, even though racism towards the African American culture isn’t as strong as it used to be there is still people who feel the need to hide their true selves in certain scenarios. It is hard to bring an example into play because I personally don’t feel the need to hide my side of being part African American in any scenario. There are two movies describing certain scenarios, one is called “Sorry to bother you” and “Hidden Figures”. “Hidden Figures” is about the first women to work for NASA and how she was frowned upon and it wasn’t “correct” to society. “Sorry to bother you”, is about a very talented black man who worked for a telemarketing company and is forced to use “his white voice”.  

There should be certain period where these kinds of people should be protected by society because of the many years of hardships, “Group-based identity politics is not dead. As I have argued. I still believe in a group-based accommodation model for existing civil rights groups. This is in part because I believe we made a commitment to those groups to protect them from such covering demands.”- Kenji Yoshino.  

Overall, these examples, quotes, and scenarios that I personally shared with you and hypothetically shared with you should give you a better understanding in how these groups of people feel daily. So maybe next time you see a Muslim man or women out in public greet them, speak with them, smile and wave. Have a conversation with any of these groups of people if seen in public, it goes a long way and it definitely would if someone were to do that to me.

Yoshino Essay

I feel like there are two different groups of people that face societal demands and must hide their true selves, compared to letting themselves be free and expose their true selves to the societal world. One group is the African American culture and the other is Women, even though racism towards the African American culture isn’t as strong as it used to be there is still people who feel the need to hide their true selves in certain scenarios. It is hard to bring an example into play because I personally don’t feel the need to hide my side of being part African American in any scenario. There are two movies describing certain scenarios, one is called “Sorry to bother you” and “Hidden Figures”. “Hidden Figures” is about the first women to work for NASA and how she was frowned upon and it wasn’t “correct” to society. “Sorry to bother you”, is about a very talented black man who worked for a telemarketing company and is forced to use “his white voice”.  

There should be certain period where these kinds of people should be protected by society because of the many years of hardships, “Group-based identity politics is not dead. As I have argued. I still believe in a group-based accommodation model for existing civil rights groups. This is in part because I believe we made a commitment to those groups to protect them from such covering demands.”- Kenji Yoshino.  

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